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for Discovering the Hidden Heart

by belladonnacordial

person angel
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great and i love what mione did that was wonderful ..please update soon and later for now

angel
person Leah
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just read the story today; I like it. You obviously had to have it planned out to tie the elements together so well. Kudos.

I also like how you come up with more interesting ways of getting people to leave reviews than just, "R&R PLZ!". The danger of making your day inspired me to do so. :-)
person firewall
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 10 - Brava Hermione! Well spoken.
person firewall
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BTW - I was a youngster viewing the Tingler too. It was on the late night Fright show on channel 7 which we got from I believe Buffalo, NY. Hahahaha.
person Penny
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far! Keep up the good work!!! I like the way your protray Snape in this story. So many fanfic writers make him something he is not. Thanks.
Penny
person SnapesPet30
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I guess I am going to be making your day lol. This really a fantastic story, I admit I haven't read this in a while but once i started to early this morning, I couldn't stop. I love the relationship between Severus and Hermione they are good for each other in so many ways. Loved the bit about the book in Dumbledore's library that was too funny. I look forward to when you update, well done!
person Vermillion Rhodes
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is completely fascinating me! I've been doling it out in small doses so I can enjoy it for the longest possible time although now, alas, I'm to the end of what's been uploaded and now it seems I'll have to wait for you to do the doling. (And to be honest, I was doling faster than you were updating, darn it!) You could have knocked me over with a feather at the news of the parasite. Completely unexpected. I also appreciate the attention to detail you have and wonderful s-t-o-r-y you have going. Really and truly, I need a plot to enjoy a story. The PWPs just don't do it for me. I need to get involved with the characters and the plight and your story is allowing me to do that. Thank you so much!
person DawnEB
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great! Hermione was so in character too. Thank you so much for a wonderful chapter that really helped lift me out of the 'Last Minute Christmas Panic' dumps :}
person Sioux
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Hey. Well I'm certainly enjoying your little fanfic. Great and believable plot. Good references to events within the 'real' HP books and brilliant suppositions as to unwritten events. Keep up the good work. And, of course, thank you for staving off my occasional bouts of boredom.
person Anon
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love their banter, it is very entertaining.
-A sweet lass