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chapter 10

it seems that you are missing a 'be'.

"It certainly would not me who beat you out for that dubious honor."

love the chapter.

Omg, I need an update! You're killing me, Smalls! (haha, I think I'm funny...anyhoo) I love this story and am having a hard time finding anything to criticize about it. The only thing I would like to see change is the way the dialogue is delivered. To me, it's much to formal and dry, and it's given to the reader rapid fire, no description or anything in between comments. It gets a little tedious to read after a while. But I do love this story and can't wait to see the next chapter!

My my you havent updated in along time. There are only a few writers on here that i like and you ar brilliant. I love this story, its very well worded and as down to earth as harry potter fanfiction can be, Ha. But you are a lovely writer, do continue.

Thank you for spinning such a wonderful and beautifully written story. Stories such as this are why I continue reading fan fiction and why I began writing it myself. Though it is difficult to choose one aspect of your story to compliment, I would have to choose the way in which you lull the reader to sadness and then force them to laugh. It is a singular talent and one that so many strive to achieve and so few are able to realize. If you are still seeking a beta reader, I would be more than happy to do so. It may take a little while to reread the first ten chapters again while beta editing, but I would force myself to do it anyway. All right, it would be my pleasure. Thank you for the splendid read and I look forward the next chapter.

Kim (polywolly)

again i am hooked to this story and shall be. Great chapter once more! You are making this one great story and i love the plot ..something new all the time..* sits in front of screen and waits for te next update!*

This chapter rocked! I loved how Hermione put Fudge in his place! That was great! Update again and soon!

Tiffany

Wonderful! Wonderful! That speech was sooo like Hermione! Can't wait until the next installment!

This fic always makes me smile. I love the interplay between your Mione and Snape. Please keep up the great work.

Great chapter! It seems like something Hermione would want to do. Now she can blame it on her parasite too. I've heard the phrase 'ratcatcher's ball' before and have no idea what it means. Is there some reason for the title other than Fudge turning into a rat? I'm not just being lazy. I googled it but couldn't find anything.

Wonderful Holiday present fanfic!