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I just finished chapter 11. I love your dialogue, your sense of humour is spot on. You seriously had me in stitches with:
"Do they fly?"
"Only on the M5..."
Such sharp wit. Thank you so much. Please update soon.

This is incredible. I haven't read anything that required so much brain power in ages. I feel drained. But it's worth it. Please update soon. I'm just about hyperventilating over the upcoming "near death" experience.

yes! A new chapter! I love this story, and love the dialogue between Severus and Hermione -- they really keep each other on their toes. I very, VERY much look forward to reading more.

Along time ago i stumbled over one of your stories on Adultfanfic, discovering the hidden heart. It has been the best story i have ever read on AF, and i searched for it today, just to see if it was completed. It saddens me that it isnt, you show the characters in the exact same light Rowling does. You pin them perfectly, if not better than rowling. I beg of you as a fellow writer and lover of Fanfiction that you complete the story. It breaks my heart, that goddamn cliff hanger. I still havent given up hope even though its almost been a year since the last update. You are the most wonderful writer.

I am loving this story and good idea about her checking Malfoy's books, maybe a bookstore in Knockturn alley might just have the information she's looking for. Just a quick idea there. I'm starting to get the feeling that once Hermione does put the moves on Snape, that he might just turn her down, citing the reason that she is under the influence of the parasite, possibly. I sense arguments of her sanity and freedom abrewing...

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

CH: Ten...

Please continue this. The rapport between Hermione and Snape is wonderfully written. He is neither caustic, nor too flowery, and she is neither too 'insufferable' nor to dim-witted. It truly is a remarkable tale you've begun to weave - the build up is brilliant.

I love the way you've also interwoven some Natural American History into the story line as well, and I cheered quite loudly when Hermione told the Ministry to go shove the award up their arses... and Ron... and Luna - ESPECIALLY Luna. Only she could get away with something like that. LoL.

I really do hope this continues, it would be sad if it didn't so, I beg you... Please update soon!

Bek

I LOVE this story!!!! Delightful and slyly witty conversation, with soupcon of angst as well as some building UST. "It is your Kneazle's good fortune that I settle for menacing anti-hero." I'm still chuckling about that sentence and your sly comment in one of your author's notes about Muggle politics. Very Well Done! I am looking forward to reading more!

Whoa! Excellent first chapter: What a stark description of battle, and Hermione's anger (the flipside of the coin called depression) and PTSD.

please please please update. I love the banter between them.