rate_review Reviews

All I have to say is:

"After we play we will switch positions to give you practice playing on both sides."
Double entendre, much?

Okay, I'm a liar! That's not all I have to say!
I absolutely love this fanfiction! It's wonderfully written, and intelligently, too. Somehow, it just seems like if Hermione and Snape ever got a chance to just get together and talk, this is how they would eventually become friends.

I can't wait for an update! You're amazing!

I love this story. I especially like how it's slowly building, I can't wait for the next update.

I have enjoyed reading your chapters very much. It is exactly what I would expect from Hermione and Snape if they were in that situation. You are a very talented writer and I thank you for the entertainment. I can't wait until your next chapter comes out.

Very nice. I think this story is moving along nicely, slow on the romantic buildup, but enough action to keep you interested. Nice piece of work.

I remember this song... it's a good story, which I am enjoying.

You asked for crits. Chapter 4, in Snape's library, you mention "ancient tombs"; suffering from a Homophone.

TomBs are for burying dead people, TomEs are books. Both are pronounced the same. Hope this helps.

I actually audibly gasped when I saw that this story had been updated. Glad to see you back! I was sure this story had been left for dead. On with the praise: this chapter was very dialogue-heavy, which is a different side of Snape than most authors care to show but it's very nice to see for a change. Although Snape generally comes across as reserved, I do think that when actually given the chance to participate in a mentally stimulating conversation, he would become much more talkative. So, well done, and I hope to see more! Good luck with the next chapter. :D

I'm going to start this with the disclaimer of: I just finished a very-rough 12 hour shift at work, I had to drive home in a lovely freezing-rain storm, walked in to a huge mess of tree/decorations/wrapping paper everywhere as signifigant other got caught up in a computer game ( for three hours....grumble)end disclaimer

sooooooo....I decided to sit, caffiennate and read AFF for a few minutes. FOUR HOURS LATER, and quite a few audible giggles/snorts and/or guffaws,I have come to the current end of your fabulous story. So to aid in the saving of my sanity, please feed your plot bunnies ( see soon to be arriving owls with P.B.U.N.S {Silent P like pnumonia} Plot Bunny Uber Nourishing Seeds. As well some C.L.A.W.S treats {Crunchy Little Animal WhatnotS} to make sure the Plot bunnies don't become C.L.A.W.S themselves.

I'm off to get some very much needed sleep, happy writings!

Skye

I love, Love, LOVE this story! Eagerly awaiting next update!! May Real Life not suck for you, now and always.

Elizabeth

Alright! Alright! I'm reviewing. Cor.

I just found this story today and have just finished chapter 8, 3 more to go atm. I'm very impressed; wonderful build up, excellent characterization, please keep up the good work. Now I must get back to chapter 9!

Extaordinary Fic! Spot character analyses.
Your blending of canon and potential future are so gritty but compelling.
Please continue.