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for Discovering the Hidden Heart

by belladonnacordial

person Severessa
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my God. YOU are now one of my favorite authors. I know that reviews should center around concrit, but I don\'t feel qualified to find something to criticize, even constructively. As a matter of fact, I cannot find something that isn\'t there. Just know that this is an excellent story, and one that I hope you can see through to the end. I am definately along for the ride!

I am Severessa Snape, btw, just a lurker that sometimes reviews but always appreciates.
person Tigerrr
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! The first chapter just drew me in... I can\'t wait for more! People may flame your mailbox to ash for it, but I for one appreciate a slow-building story.. makes the \"reward\" that much more exciting to read ;)