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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter! I can\'t wait to read more. Please update again and soon.
Tiffany
Tiffany
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story, I\'m liking it very much. Severus is in a way the only who would truly understand what she is going through. Update soon please.
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy the way you write dialogue - looking forward to more.
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"He did wear that colour, but only to the Ministry...\" My dear, you continue to outdo yourself!!! This is positively priceless!! :)
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you write beautifully - i especially liked the parts about rocks. it was very subtle yet brought great meaning to the story. i look forward to more chapters. aloha, mele
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Loving the story so far, that remark \"You are the stuff of legend any time of day\" was hilarious!
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The standard of the first two chapters is outstanding.
At the end of the first chapter I had tears in my eyes. Reading the next chapter as calmed me to
a certain extent, but I still feel for Hermione and to some extent Severus.
Two souls in need of comfort and deliverence should make a hell of a story, one which I will be reading.
Best wishes.
At the end of the first chapter I had tears in my eyes. Reading the next chapter as calmed me to
a certain extent, but I still feel for Hermione and to some extent Severus.
Two souls in need of comfort and deliverence should make a hell of a story, one which I will be reading.
Best wishes.
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay quick updates! Can\'t wait to read more!
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello. Very good story. Kinda sad and lonely, but I like it. I will totally keep reading. One thing tho: grammar. You have lots of trouble with comma placing and some spelling mistakes. Other than that, nothing else. Very good. I can\'t wait for more. BTW, are you into French history? They were very into Liberty, Fraternity and Equality after the Revolution and that ended up on their old coins as well. Sorry, random, but that\'s just me... I see little things and make them big.. Well, keep writing and I\'ll keep reading!!
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lovely. i\'ll be bookmarking this one.