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~lol~ man i love there meeting ... please more more and i hope the headmistress say it is ok for mione to study with snape.... and i wonder what other dreams snape will have ...please update soon and keep up the awesome work and later for now

angel

Lots of interesting ideas here. They would have an intellectual courtship. Could dream himself pharaoh and still not get laid. That was great.

this is very good, can\'t wait for more.

interesting analysis of Slytherin politics and philosophies.
Please continue.

Hello there. Still very good. I like that you only this to us an hour at a time, one piece of the puzzle at a time. You also have a good writing style and you are not too verbose as some writers are. Also, your commas were MUCH BETTER. Very good. I didn\'t notice any other grammar or spelling problems either, so I\'m impressed. I love history too. I\'m not too fond of the 1600\'s, but they\'ll do. I like the 1700 and 1800\'s as well as 1300-1500s. That is the Renaissance time period and I love all of that. The 1700\'s is Revolutions, fancy monarhies in France and lots of other cool stuff. So your of history is not lost on me. If you get a chance, stick in somemore subtle history things.. it\'s fun to try to find them. Well, keep writing and I\'ll keep reading.
Emmaline

A very hearty \'WELL DONE!\' , dearie!!! Wow, what a great find your story is! I am very anxious to see where you are going with these two extrordinary(is that spelled correctly? Too lazy to find out!) characters. Poor, Hermione! What a sad beginning, but much potential for happiness with the help of the great Severus Snape! Keep up the great writing, love!!! I will be looking forward to more! Happy writing! Tengo que irme! Salud!
New fan,
Killer K :D

Hermione\'s attempt at religious analogy was delightfully convoluted and almost had me rolling on the floor.

Keep going, girl!!

Great chapter! I can\'t wait to read about their next meeting! This is an awsome story! Please update again and soon!

Tiffany

I am totally intrigued with this story. I hope you update soon and often.

~lol~ that was great i love it ...i like how they are getting each other to open up ..... please please update soon and keep up the awesome work and later for now

angel