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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow the talk like friend not a teacher and student... i love it ...and why did Minerva change her hair color .... please please update soon and keep up the awesome work and later for now
angel
angel
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a lovely story. I hope to see more of it!
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goddess!!!!! Hermione's description of poor Harry's travails ("frying chips"...,etc.) had me in total paroxysms. I'm still chuckling! You have no idea (well, maybe YOU do....) how much your delicious prose lights up this site.
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello! I'm back again! I liked this chapter. It revealed a lot that I think JKR should tell us! You rock. you did have a few typos tho.. You spell Lilly like that but in the books it's spelled Lily. Just a heads up for next time her name comes up.. also, you left the r off a few times when you were trying to say "your." Other than that, nothing. Very good, keep it up!
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You HAVE to update! This has gotta be one of the best Herm/Seve fics I've ever read. Cant wait to see a lemon from you!
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent stuff - keep it up!
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant, doll!!! What a wonderful little gem you have here! All this building up to Snape and Hermione\'s romance is torture, but in a good way!!! It will make the inevitable so much better! Great job and I can\'t wait for more! Happy writing, mi chicquita!!! Tengo que irme! Salud!
Hugs and kisses,
Killer K :D
Hugs and kisses,
Killer K :D
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello. Back again! I liked this chapter, but not as much as the other ones. It seemed a little slower, but it was still informative. Don\'t worry, I am not expecting every chapter to be exciting or suspense full. It was a good chapter, it just didn\'t seem to catch me like the others did. Have no fear tho, I will always read it as long as you write it! Also, I\'ve noticed that your grammar has improved. I haven\'t seen any mistakes in a while! Good work! Much Love,
Emmalline
Emmalline
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is just wonderful. I love their conversations and their chemistry. My only complaint is that I have to keep waiting to read more!
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great update! What did Severus\'s dream mean? If anything. I can\'t wait to read your next chapter! Keep up the awsome writing!
Tiffany
Tiffany