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dialog... sometimes I can spell. This is the quotation i was asking about.

'The scourge of curses all surpassed with just one good intention cast'.

Where did this come from?
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I am enjoying your story so much! Whever did you find the facts about dreams? I'm going to do some research on my own now! Thanks for the inspiration. I love your Snape. Very clever the way you made him into a spy before he was a deatheater. very original. With all the fanfic I know that sometimes it's hard to feel that anything is original. I can't wait to read more but thought I would send a note telling you how very much I am enjoying your writing!
Annabel

I cant wait for the next installment

I'm enjoying this thoroughly. You have an eloquent, visceral style which is quite refreshing. I'm delighted to see that you're working on your reflexive comma problem (although in some cases they're necessary.) If no one has mentioned yet, it's headmaster and headmistress (one word, rather than head master and head mistress.)

I will look forward to your updates.

Loved Snape's take on the marauders. Enjoying this a lot. Hey I read the rest of your stories too. Can't wait for Snape and Hermione to get to it since your sex scenes are the real cause of global warming.

Awsome update! I can't wait to see how her first lesson goes! Update again and soon!

Tiffany

Now I've finished all of your chapters to date. Other than thinking your Snape is a bit loquacious (even though you've given him reason,) I think this is a wonderful story. It's eloquent without being suffocatingly erudite, and I very much like the Snape/Granger interaction. Minerva reacting in such a Dumbledorian fashion is really so fitting. It's out of character for the stiff witch we've grown to know, but it's entirely in keeping with her mourning and showing a side of her we've never seen. Once more, I look forward to your future chapters.

You are gifted. The dialog is outstanding!

Snape, she realized was both shockingly rude and theatrically polite. He seemed to have no sense of moderation when it came to manners.

Well, I now know more concretely one of the reasons my husband reminds me so much of Snape. I LOVED that!
You are a clever, clever, CLEVER girl! I'd love to read something you've written with original characters! I certainly know you have it in you.

Excellent insight into the characters! I think that you have a very logical outlook on Severus' history as well as Hermione's affect after the war. Good job. I really like this story, and I am glad that you are continuing it. If I were qualified to critique, I would say that more description of events would be good. It would also be in keeping for Hermione to come upon a memory that unglues her at some point in her "therapy". I also think that Severus would have those times, and maybe since they are talking about it all, he could let his guard down a little.

Anyway, good job, and please don't think that I was criticizing; I don't have the guts to put a story on the Web in any fashion. I'm not worthy, I'm not worthy... :D

Wow~ impressive dialouge...is that an actual quotation or did you spin that? Clever girl!
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