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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oops! Please insert "seditious" in place of "perditious" in my above review. I always get those those two mixed up!
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story. I can't wait to see how it goes. Please post again soon.
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am throughly enjoying your tale. It has a stately, almost courtly style to it yet manages to engage the reader rather than warding them off. In some ways the reparte between Hermione and Severus calls to mind the exchanges between Peter Wimsey and Harriet Vane. There is wit and wisdom in their conversations that is completely enchanting. I very much look forward to future updates and Thank You for sharing your work. I believe that you must do a lot of rewriting to achieve the degree of polish your efforts show.
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Munch, munch...
allright the story is progressing quite nicely, and I am very intrigued as to how you came up with the ideas as to what goes on during Oclumency.
Now can you get them together soon, or at least get Severus interested in Hermione in a romantic way, I like fluff can you tell.
Good writting keep it up, I prefer chapters to imaginary chocolate frogs they are much more enjoyable.
allright the story is progressing quite nicely, and I am very intrigued as to how you came up with the ideas as to what goes on during Oclumency.
Now can you get them together soon, or at least get Severus interested in Hermione in a romantic way, I like fluff can you tell.
Good writting keep it up, I prefer chapters to imaginary chocolate frogs they are much more enjoyable.
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still loving this one. Love the pacing, the rythm...just wish you'd update it regularly!! More, please!
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL How about a review just because I want to? I thoroughly enjoyed the beginning of this story. It has a good pace and it well-written. I'm looking forward to more chapters soon.
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hooray for another entertaining chapter! My sides are still hurting from reading it, and I think I'll have to firmly tape my ribs before reading the next update.
You go, girl!!
You go, girl!!
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You've crafted an interesting friendship between the two. I'm enjoying the story thus far. :)
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*starts crying* Holy shit woman you're so good! MORE MORE MORE!
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*starts crying* Holy shit woman you're so good! MORE MORE MORE!