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for Discovering the Hidden Heart

by belladonnacordial

person slinki
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I'm hooked. I just discovered this fic (because I'm reading them in an odd order) and I'm now waiting desperately for another chapter. You evil fiend! *glower* I really do like it though, so keep writing! ;)
person lovethelab
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved your poem at the end so much I had to review. Really good chapter. I am glad that Snape now knows that Hermione is a bit worse off then even he realized. Too funny about Hermione not eating his offered meat even for lessons.
person WiloWisp
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please Please Please continue writing this story! I'm truly enjoying it and getting completely sucked into the well done characters and the unique situation their in. I'm always looking for new updates so keep them coming and I'll keep reading. Thanks for a great story.
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an awsome story! Sorry I haven't reviewed for your last few chapters! I can't wait to find out what happens next! I hope you will updating again and soon!

Tiffany
person Anon
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am but a sweet lass begging for you to continue
Strawberries will always bring forth a faint memory
of serpents heads because of you
It is how my mind works and I am not complaining...
person firewall
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a great chapter. First everyone should have a Room of Requirement to plan their lives. Second poor Hermione, her neurosis is worse than I thought. Severus is wonderful here. What a man, er wizard!
person Severessa
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story, excellent chapter. I have no criticism for you, even the constructive kind. You write far better than I ever will. Please update soon.
person Hope
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Write please write
your reading is never trite
If you stop before they get together
I shall make you wear and itchy sweater.
person Willa
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
incredible chapter, i loved it. please i want more!!!
person Hypatia
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You've done it again, you purveyor of purposefully perditious, perpetually pleasing prose. Just when I was starting to recover from the last update!!