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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow i really like this story i wish it was not a one shot ..i would of like to read what would of happen next ... i cant wait in till your next story keep up the great work later
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fun! I have to wonder if he didn\'t know what he was doing though. A sequel perhaps? It would be interesting to see how their relationship progresses.
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well now, I think you should carry on and write a second chapter and even a third. This can stand alone very nicely but I think it can be continued even more. It was really good.
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesomely good writting you got them together without making Lucius OOC, but please I beseech you to continue
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m all for Lucius/Hermione fics. Not enough out there if you ask me. I liked how you were able to keep him both in character, but actually um...nice. Well, as nice as he can be. Thanks for sharing this. Even though its a one-shot you left it open for more, so if you ever decide you can certainly make something longer from it.