rate_review Reviews

I thought it was a great story! I usually don\'t like the marriage stories, but this one was not frilly and sweet. It\'s Lucius afterall, and he\'s devilishly delicious. :) Sleep walking is a fun way to go, then anything is acceptable! Well done.

That was really good!
I know its a one shot, but you should think about doing a sequel!

I would love to read more of Lucius/Hermione fics. I think I like them more the other fics with her, other then the Draco/Hermione fics.

Lucius/Hermione are my favorite combination. There is just something so much more delicious about the couple once they finally get together. I, as a fellow writer of that specific ship, must say that I enjoyed it very much, and I do look forward to more. PLease do more on this story. I think it is off to an awesome beginning!

Very wicked of Lucius. Hermione is in for it now.

This is really good. But it read more like a first chapter than a one-shot coz it\'s inconclusive. It\'d be great if you continued for a few more chapters to discuss, will Hermione be happy? How will it affect her relationship with Ron and Harry? Will Remus feel guilty? Will Hermione and Lucius find love or will it be a marraige of convenience? I really do hope you write more.

I must say that I love it. hope to have more soon

Dear me, your fic was very well written. Why leave it as a one-shot, I think you should turn this one into a muti-chapter fic. I like how you arranged the story and how you described their new lives after the war. It was good that you kept Lucius arrogant and aristocratic. I hate it when people change him into a broken man because he\'s lost his family and has to rebuild a his life after azkaban. I mean maybe it would be ok for him to have a nightmare about it once and awhile. He just seems like the type of man to keep it all inside and \"just walk if off\". Also, it was good you keep Hermione fighting(stuggling) to move on in her life and not lay down and give up. I guess that\'s two thing they have in common in your fic: lost of family and moving on. Very good story overall, I would love to read more. Not to mention, the sex part was very delicious ;)

This cannot be a one shot! Very good. Yes, there is something about a bad guy. I suspect he was awake the whole time?

You\'re absolutely right - there definitely is something quite delicious about a bad guy, especially someone like Lucius. I really enjoyed this story, so I\'d be more than happy to read more from you!! Great work!! And a fantastic plot!! ;)