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by Maevenly

person Adaee
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very good story written by an obviously talented author. Keep it up. You use a lot of sensory details to truly convey what isnt just intimacy, but love. Write more, and dont be self concious about your work.
person Raiha
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Quite an amazing story. It was extremely well written and was very moving and passionate at the same time. I commend you on writing a great H/H story. Oh, and the thing about the silver organisms in the ocean, that sound truly amazing and a once in a life time experience.
person sexy girl
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was great aww i just watched the 4 harry potter it was good u should see it its so sad though and it way different from the book grrr
person THX1138
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it a lot. Thanks for writing. Its hot!