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by Maevenly

person Finality
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. The descriptions in your writing were absolutely awe-inspiring. It truly kept me reading, despite it's length, and the creativity was of a story you'd find in a million. Definitely a favorite of mine in my reccommended reading. Keep it up.

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person Nymphe
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Simply beautiful, moving, bright and erotic...if this is a PWP, it is the best one I have ever read.
person Skanky Hime
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well ... wow ... that was pretty intense...
person DarkWizardKiller
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! What more can one say. This was without a doubt, THE BEST fan-fiction story I have ever read. Absolutely beautiful in every aspect of it's written word. I truly believe that your descriptive prose would win awards if you decided to use original characters however, It would not have the same sensual impact. You are a prolific writer with more talent than most! Thank you for sharing such wonderful talent.
person Kagome Nguyen
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow ... is this story a one-shot? i mean, umm ... Are you going to write more? hehehehe
person Robin Holmes
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW. That just defined Watch and Learn. That was incredible. I don\'t think I have read anything else that even comes close to the sheer Magnatude of this. I think Tolkien (RIP) would look at this and say \"Now THAT\'S good writing.\"
person Babi
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG !!!!! i think i held my breath the whole time i read this !! i just have to say that seeing the 4th movie for the 4 time before i read this was the best let me tell you seeing harry 20 minutes before this helped the whole story for me !! lol I dont know if this is a one shot i hope its not cause it would really kick ass if you kept going with this i would def keep reading !!
person hh lover
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I abseloutly love it! But i\'m a little ebarassed to ask... what is a crookshank?
person Cwolf
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was very well writen I must say, though it seems a little long to be a one-shot.
person Sidney Malfoy
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was very well written. If you don\'t mind, I would love to draw a picture of this and put it up on my deviantart acccount, giving you complete credit for the story of course. Granted, it won\'t be posted until approximately late January, but still... If I may, please let me know. The way that you describe the scene is in itself pure amazement, and you deserve to have this story on every single person\'s favourite list.