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September 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What....are they psychic? Why do they never talk? Eyes can't tell you everything.
I was seriously lost after the part that confirmed it was Hermione. What would have been a great point to break into a conversation was made confusing by the whole 'asking questions and giving answers with their eyes' thing.
It was SERIOUSLY well written, just confusing as hell.
I was seriously lost after the part that confirmed it was Hermione. What would have been a great point to break into a conversation was made confusing by the whole 'asking questions and giving answers with their eyes' thing.
It was SERIOUSLY well written, just confusing as hell.
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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Why aren't you a professional writer??? This is absolutely brilliant!!!
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was incredible - perfect! wow - You did an amazing job capturing them - the way they are, the way they relate - it was all great.
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was one of the most incredibly written stories of this nature that I have read! It was wonderful. I felt like I was standing back watching Harry, watching Hermione. I felt like the voyeur. The writing was so very vivid! This is definitley going on my favorites list. Thanks for the great work.
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woow!! This is the best piece of Harry/Hermione fanfic I've ever read!!! Great job! I'm deeply impressed!
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story so you should be proud of yourself for accoplishing suck an amazing feat of words that made the story something to remember
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hot. This is hot. Hotter than... this is just hot. Thank you for *fans myself* sharing this.
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You wrote that very well! FIVE STARS! i loved it! i never broke my eyes from the screen it was that intense. Do you have anything else on here? i'd love to read it!
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That... was.. incredible. Your description, and your storyline was just amazing. Talented writers such as you are few and far between but your intense description and the way you convey the scene was beyond even some professional style writers. You are an extremely talented author. I cannot begin to understand the amount of time and effort went into writing this and proofing this. Just deserves an extreme amount of respect.
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December 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is the most hilarious sex scene I have ever read.