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for Pet

by LinW

person sak
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you! I always wondered how much backstage maneuvering Harry could get up to in his position. I also wanted to see what sort of girl and woman Rose would turn out to be. Lovely story!
person lilith
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its a bit sad that this story is ending, because I could have read more and more of it, but I loved the ending nontheless. However, there is some mistake in the chapters - the epilogue is missing and ch 31 is posted twice.
person NightShade
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg! These chapters are wonderful!
person Aisling
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh more soon cyya x
person L'ETJE
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a very vert good stoy keep going and post soon
bye bye
person Lee
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not what I expected, but good. I do hope that there is some resistance left but a good character study.
person nudistikissa
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what a cliffhanger!!! i want more...now.

i've just sat in front of my computer for two hours and read and cried and laughed. i really liked it. you have the facts right and you don't have any grammar mistakes that i can notice (am not a native speaker).

i've been trying to find a good lucius/harry fic for ages, and now i have found it. thank you..

when are you going to update??
person Mashell
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lucius is so
cool. I like his
way of showing
Harry & Rose off.
I also like how you
did the point of view
form the reports angle
through out the funeral.
Showed the whole process
really well. I hope you add
more soon because I really
love this fic.

Mashell
person avihenda
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh! another update :-) so happy!
the story is heading in a more romantic direction. It feels like the end is near :-(

what will I read when Pet is finished??

I feel so sorry for Mark, poor guy.
as allways, great read!
person Mashell
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How can you
do this to us!
How could you
stop now! When
Harry's in danger.
You're evil! Anway.
Great set of chapters
added to a great fiction.
I hope you update soon.
because I'm going insane.
waiting to know what happens.

Mashell