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by LinW

person Chavela
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Perfect, is the only word I can think of!
person j.s.
schedule September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad I found this story. You did a great job of developing your characters!
person Julia
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know your fics are sssoooo COOL! I love them! Please write soon!
person BlackAnimeQueen
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM

I loved this fanfic. I could practically feel the inner turmoil of Harry. Personally, HP Slave fics are a guilty pleasure of mines. *sigh* You did great. Loved the fic.
person JJ
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A very original and well crafted story!!! I can't say enough about what a wonderfully balanced tightrope you walked in writing this: Never too grisley, never to fluffy. Harry came off as delicate, but not necessarily effeminate. I can see what happened as a more truthful possibility of an emotionally damaging/loveless home life on top of the demanding expectations of being the 'savior of the wizarding world' while being unprepared to fight the battle 16 year old. I also enjoyed the potion master's development from Death Eater to concubine. Bravo!!!
person Sestra
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A stonkingly good read - it has kept me entertained for hours! I enjoyed your slow revelation of my lovely Lucius' softer side - and you polished off The Bitch, Ha! Your portrayal of Draco caring for his little sis was lovely, and Severus was a super mixture of his old self and a newer, more understanding man. Well done and thanks. Cheers, Ses.x.
person Nomos421
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Have just finished reading it and wanted to make it known (in case, you are reading reviews still). It is wonderful story, made in a VERY professional style... I liked it! Hope to have more of your pieces to read ('cos the others are already done ^_^)
person Lettie
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I just read this story of yours and I must say I really liked it a lot. I loved many of the wonderful details of your story but mostly I loved when the Weasley sweaters where mentioned. Those sweaters made my eyes a little wet with tears a couple of times. Well done!
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person Anon
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why did you pull the other stories? As they were interesting.
person Chloe the Grey
schedule December 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story. You had me worried for a while, but things turned out reasonable well for Harry considering the circumstances. Good job! :D