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Whew! that was a long read. I must say that I really liked this fic, and i'm glad it's completed. Otherwise it would left me feeling very annoyed 'cause alot of fic that i read left unfinished.

Well, thanks for writing a great story ^^

Ok, that was by far, one of the best fics i have read. Thank you so much for completing it. I hate it when i get really into a fic and then find it isn't finished. This one was so beautifully written, i actually had tears for Harry at points. It was so good that i have just read the whole thing in one go and it is approacing one in the morning.
Thank you for having Harry be completely Gryfindor with the Slytherin cunning. *Gives hugs as a thanks*

Thank you for such a wonderfully moving and well developed story.

Nicely done!
I think what I liked most was how you portrayed Draco (being my favourite person in the Potterverse), he wasn't a bastard to Harry.
I really enjoyed your story, thank you!
Ali

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Wow!
This ... relationship is wrong on so many accounts, and yet I can actually imagine Harry becoming something quite close to happy in the future, what with his daughter, his magic and a Lucius who starts to understand how seriously he fucked up, as far as behaviour towards Harry goes. I hope he'll come to understand all of it one day. Then again, he is Malfoy, he might never.
Either way, though, I'm positive Harry will slowly, but surely re-shape the entire society with his 'pillow talk'. And more. :)
This was a wonderful, exciting and so very angsty story. I loved it!
Dime
P.S.: So- was it Stockholm, the bonding or something else? ;D

I have loved this story for a very long time, I adore your prose, the way you draw your characters and your portrayal of Harry and Severus in this story. I was recced Blackbird and have just finished that, but just wanted to comment on this story before I go and rec that too, Thanks for sharing.

Lucie

That was the most stirring mpreg fic I have ever read. Very complex and it felt real to me. I'm cursing myself for my own lack of imagination when it comes to the organic nature of writing. You have it. I loved every single chapter of it. I cried when Lucius found Harry. But even moreso when I thought for a brief second Narcissa had killed Rose. I also loved that Draco was the protective older brother. Not many people have the courage to go to the depths you have. Please, please, please write more. Send me links to them via FreddyKruegerRE@yahoo.com. I LOVED IT!!!!

This is right up there with AuctorRubra's Numen Pumilum. Very well thought out.

i love the story please make another for severus

GAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
I fucking love this fic! It has my fav HP pairing and the way you've got the Dark Lord all worked out is freakin' sweet! I LOVE IT!

i thought this was an awesome read. it was well written. i had one or two issues with the passage of time that were a bit confusing but it didn't cause any serious problems. i like that malfoy never becomes obviously lovesick even if we (the readers) do have our own suspicions. the characters were really well written. the whole thing took me awhile to read (probably should have taken longer but i couldn't stop reading) but the length seemed appropriate. it didn't feel like the story was dragged out or prolonged past its natural life. good job! :)