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by LinW

person mab
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my!! Sinfully delicious!

Please may I have some more?
person Chloe the Grey
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good so far. I can\'t wait to read more...

Interesting, Snape calling Harry \"love\". Is it just platonic? Or are the pets getting a bit too friendly with each other? And poor Seamus! I imagine that he\'ll be dead soon, either from the too rough treatment, or he\'ll find a way to end it himself. I\'m wondering what happened to Ron? I don\'t think that he\'s been mentioned yet. Was he brought to a different holding cell, or did something else happen to him? I\'m also curious about what happened to the female halfbloods. Were they distributed like the males?

It will be interesting to find out what will happen to get to the point of the prologue, as well as after that.
person NightShade
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good. Very good, well written and interesting situation.
person Aisling
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good the damn bitch-- it serves her right, and Lucius too :( sorry im a very unhappy puppy where it concerns those two so far!! more soon tho... :D :D
person Trisha
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Superb!!! I really like this story, and I can\'t wait to see what happens next. Great job, and thanks for getting the chapters out so quickly. I can\'t wait for whatever\'s coming next! Oh and, PLEASE no mpreg, not that it squicks me or that I\'m against it, but I just think your story is really good and I don\'t want that to ruiin it.
person Trisha
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I am an idiot! I just noticed that mpreg was one of your warnings!! Oh well, it\'s still a pretty good story.
person Reader
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I red this story on another site and loved it, you inspired me to write my own Luc/Harry fics.
person NightOwl
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This last chapter touched my heart... The rape made me very sad, I hoped better for Harry. Yes, I know the logic of this kind of stories, even if there is some \"comfort\" in them (and I hope for comfort for Harry), there has to be \"hurt\" also, but this time it was really painful, probably because Lucius wasn\'t so completely careless about Harry (even if he surely wasn\'t caring lover). It\'s painful situation.
person Sea
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting plot and well written. Looking forward to more.
person andie
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting situation, Lucius is not \"pure evile\", is he? I like it very much!