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*laughs* yay, Severus in coaching class, that\'s going to be interesting... Just wondering, if Severus was to lit the wand and hand it over, it would still work?! Isn\'t it the magic of whoever holds the damn thing that it is working at all? Well, maybe Snape is so distraught, that his wandless magic helps him out a bit... Anyway, this story is different, though I appreciate it, since I\'m not a mother to at least hear/read of somebody else, who went through the whole ordeal (I suppose..). I just don\'t know if it actually encourages to have babys... I like lemons but I still appreciate real-life stories (kinda)...! Please keep writting and updating, your style is fab!!!!

Ooh, this is great so far!

The italics were fine and worked fine. Thanks!

I am really really loving this story!!!!

I hope it doesnt turn out like some of the good ones out there and not get finished.

PLEASE make sure you finish it!!!

~lol~ i love what the other women were saying about Severus and is hands~grins~.. i love it... and how Dr.Digmon and Pomfrey are getting along now but i wonder ... what did the receptionist do when so found the doc gone.....and tell the other patients .. please more .. this is great....later for now

angel

oh goodie , I was waiting for this to arrive, having just finished your other two stories, I was hoping you\'d do a \"funny\" baby story.

I could see your Severus storming in like that, and I know how it feels to be in a weird temp job like the girl, had a few in my time.

ch 2 : the flash-backs work well. I didn\'t have trouble to identify them as flash-backs, as long as you put a visible separation between them and the actual story. Two chapters without lemons is quite a record for you but still you\'re writing what\'s promising to be another outstanding story. Heck, you made me laugh !

Ch 2 - (yes, please italicize the flashbacks) Poor Dr. Digmon is doing quite well, although he hasn\'t met Poppy yet! Or Peeves, or the ghosts, or Hagrid - but the doctor must be pretty unflappable, in his line of work. Poor Severus, truly cowed by Hermione if he let her threaten him over the Muggle exams. Heck, I\'d rather have Poppy just wave a wand over me and skip the hands-on exam! Thanks for the new chapter. (PS - are Marcus and Cassandra anywhere near Hogwarts, or have they moved to her island permanently by now?)

Your depiction of Severus\'s perception of modern muggle obstetrics is priceless! LOL! Absolute perfection.

More please