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person droxy
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Such nice fluff, Severus is such a wonerful husband.
person firewall
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...Chuckles madly to self....You just can\'t stop can you Ms. Figg? Although this story wasn\'t as intensive as your other pieces, you just have to tinker with it, don\'t you? LOL Looking forward to the addition *I was going to say insertion, but restrained myself* of a new chapter.

Nicely written as usual. You are a most talented writer.
person SteffieSnape
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!!!!! That was so sweet! And it was a girl! weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!! You are right.... that baby will have Severus wrapped around her tiny little finger.... just like Hermione hs him whipped, hahahahaha!!! Wow...... just lovely..... excellent!!! I can\'t wait to read more from you.... I do hope oyu continue to write something atleast. Now you should really take that break you deserve, heehehe!! Hope all is well and best wishes! Toodles!
person calamitysandra
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, now we know it.
You are not only able to write lemons that leave us all hot and worked up, mysteries that can`t wait for the next update, no in addition you write storys that will have us crack up with laughter.

You really are a marvell.

Sandra
person JW
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 6 - ah, it ended too soon! Poor Dr. Digmon learned all that stuff and didn\'t even get to remember any of it - I just hope the Snapes don\'t stiff him for the money. (Doctors get paid for the delivery, right? Even if they don\'t remember it?) He\'ll deliver the next baby too? Sigh.... and where is your next story, Ms_Figg??? Thank you for posting!!
person BananaFlavoredEskimo
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'re such a brilliant writer! I love all of your works.

I loved that last chapter. Severus in a pregnant suit. Hilarious. I was laughing so hard that my mum actually came over and asked what was so funny.

I have to draw that. Snape is my favorite, and imagining him in a pregnant suit is far too good of a visual to pass up. Must draw!!!!
person SnapesPet30
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this story very much Ms_Figg. I\'ve always loved reading your stories they are among my favorites. Excellent job!
person Ms_Figg
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey all. Just letting you know I am going to stick in another chapter between 5 & 6. I\'m not satisfied because the sex issue wasn\'t covered. Not just because it will be lemony, but I think it is important to see how they resolved it. With Severus initially being unwilling to possibly injure Hermione or the baby by having sex and Hermione going through the roof with horniness while feeling like a whale on two feet, I think it will flesh out the story...ok. So maybe it is the challenge of writing the lemon too. Making an unhappy pregnant woman feel sexy and beautiful, and a reluctant father-to-be, agreeable. I just have to tackle that. So check back by tomorrow, maybe late tonight. Back to NC-17 rating then.
person Katie K
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely AMAZING story (particularly the whole Snape wearing a pregnant suit... I almost fell off my chair with laughter at that!) and I am looking forward to this additional chapter!
person angel
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man that was great i love it and to bad the doctor could not remember his vist.... i cant what in till your next story and in till then keep up the awesome work and later for now ..

angel