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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am sad that she is switching to drugs to numb her pain. When will the trio confront her again? When will her parents see her? When will Draco tell his side of the story to the Weasley's and Harry and Hermione? WIll she find comfort in/with Draco? I know is seems like it is just lagging but in a way it has to before she breaks down and finally shares her pain with the one person who knows what Lucius was capable of doing to harm those who he touched.
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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great job. Though Draco's a bit OOC occaisionally its only in his POV and makes him a rounder character. I like that you're really giving a probable reason for them to get together, neither feel they really belong on either side. It gives fanfic a bad name when authors just say things like "one day Ginny woke up and noticed she liked Draco". Though it is pretty dark you didn't overdo it or make it feel like torture should be hot. Waiting for the next ch.
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am sad to see that the trio have not bothered to answer or follow her around. WIll she be exposing herself to Draco? WIll he be the one to help her get thru this terrible incident? WIll Draco teach Ginny potions and also show her the way to walk away from the anger that Lucius has instilled into her? God, I was in tears and glad that you didnt prolong the whole kidnapping scene. I think it is good to look at the aftermath. She is sure to need the comfort soon.
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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I found this story not to long ago i like it keep writing
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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey! i just started reading this story and its good please keep updating
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August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW. This is an intense story and I have to say that I am glad that this side is going to be revealed and that I wondered if Draco was going to be the one to help Ginny come out of it. What is it that he will be offering her to make sure she comes through this alive?
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August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's refreshing to finally see an author who cares about the way they write. I'm sick of reading fics that have spelling mistakes and incorrect grammar all over the place! Good story, and I like the plot.
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July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story keep up the good work
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
gah, when are you going to finish this story?!?
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was honestly an amazing story. Filled with so much emotion and stength, I couldnt help but read it outloud. I was completely taken with this story, Its like nothing i\'ve read before. I loved every bit of the story, you didn\'t hold back and it left a dark sad feeling in my heart that im sure alot of other people felt. Truly wonderful, how long did it take you to write? Where did you think of the story?
Congraduations on a great story, maybe you will win an award?
Congraduations on a great story, maybe you will win an award?