rate_review Reviews

Wow. Really intense story. Very good. Can\'t wait for more.

this has my interest.. i hope you update soon...

Wow! This is good! Please update!! I like how you\'ve portrayed Harry as such a strong character.

Very interesting first chapter. I hope you update soon.

This is really good. I\'m going to make a suggestion that I hope you don\'t take the wrong way and its not to criticize you but you really need to use more paragraphs. Its rather hard to read when you keep getting lost and re-reading the same few sentences. Other than that its a really good start. I really like the bitterness that Harry has as well as his....weary acceptance on inviting a man that he hated for three years into his home...er...base. LoL. Speaking of bases I like the way Harry denies the fact that his house is a home. I\'m going to ask a stupid question now: can you post the letter? I really want to know what it says exactly to make Harry so...broken.

Anyways I hope your muses are good to you.

Happy Writings