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for A Painful Choice

by Grittie

person ice owl
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was interesting. I liked the discussion between Harry and Severus regarding sexuality. So, how did Harry know that Ron was going to wake up today?
person jess
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sounds intresting

i want to kill dumbledor :(

what is up with snape and draco? why dodn\'t they let harry decide?
person Neko Miu
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed your story; can\'t wait for the update! ^ - ^
person myniephoenix
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great.... update again soon...
person Jen
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story, is it gonna be a DM/SS/HP story? I hope so, sounds great.
person ice owl
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I can\'t figure where this is going...maybe a menage a trios? I do like all three of them together, all hot and gorgeous!
person Annie
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this chapter. I like how Harry explained why he shared the letter with Draco and why he changed his mind about talking to the blond. It\'s a really great chapter and I\'d like to say its my favorite but honestly I like them all way to much to. So what\'s going on? Does Snape and Draco like Harry and are fighting over him or what? I can\'t wait to read the next chapter.

I hope your muses are good to you.

Happy Writings
person Annie
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey again. I really like this one. I really can\'t see where this story is going, and that\'s a very good thing. I see a lot of stories that have the same themes and it all goes basically the same but your\'s doesn\'t and I really like that. I also like the updating thing every day. Its really great although I\'d understand if you didn\'t. It takes me forever to finish a chapter because I get writer\'s block a lot. LoL. I don\'t know how you\'re going to throw all this together and I really look forward to it.

I hope your muses are good to you.

Happy Writings
person luci
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
have just found your story...feel like I\'m reading a preview of (what I hope is the storyline of) book 7. Keep it up, please - really want to read more.
person Annie
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was very well written and I really like how Harry knows that if someone stronger were to come along Draco wouldn\'t hesitate to turn on him. I\'m really glad you added more paragraphs and that you weren\'t offended. I like Harry\'s slightly confusing slightly weary attitude, I think I said that before LoL. I really want to see Draco\'s reaction to the letter and what he thinks. I also want to see what Dumbledore says to Harry, if he ever visits him. Who\'s Harry going to end up with anyways? Or is it going to be several people? I like your description of Draco\'s study. And I can\'t think of anything else to say. LoL

I hope your muses are good to you.

Happy Writings