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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. It has flow and you make a nice "trail of breadcrumbs" for us to follow, tieing together events. Apart from a few minor typos and missing words in some sentences (which may be due to something weird that happens during upload as I have seen the same error in several stories) this is a really good piece of work.
*hands out a Chocolate Covered Snape* ^.^
*hands out a Chocolate Covered Snape* ^.^
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep up the good work. love the story.
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is great so far and im loving it :)...i really hope that you update soon...and that you get more review then 8(i think that was you anyways)...as for the story, it wasnt really what i was looking for, but i still loved it :) and im hoping to read another chapter soon ;)...i like how your writing the characters even if there a bit OOC (i usually dont like that) and i hope that Ron wakes up...well i must go now its 1:11am and im tired lol *hugs you* update soon :)
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww.. poor Severus. He tries so hard.
I assume Harry could -feel- Ron being ready to wake up?
I look foward to reading more from you.
I assume Harry could -feel- Ron being ready to wake up?
I look foward to reading more from you.
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story and wanted to say that I am enjoying it immensly. The tension between Harry and Severus is great. Although the tension between Harry and every character in the story is fun to read. My sympathies lie with Severus though. It has been SEverus who has figured things out and taken the initiative with Harry's problem. I hope things will work out for them, but I can't wait to continue reading! Nice going!
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is wonderful. I'm looking forward to reading more.
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story, I am really enjoying it and looking forward to more
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like this fic so far and i hope for frequent updates.
~N.S.
~N.S.
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it, i hope you continue.
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue with this story. I really like it and am curious where you will take it. I'm sure you will draw out Harry and Severus getting together, despite the fact that I can't wait for it to happen. I hope you at least give us plenty of Harry/Secerus interaction. I do love it when they banter back and forth.