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mAN HE NEEDS TO TAKE CLASSES....i love the story please update soon!!

wow, reminds me of my self, cant wait for an update

good start. keep up the good work.

Promising. You need a beta and clean up the fic\'s appearance.

i really like the story i cant wait to read more. ;)

That was really good! I can\'t wait to see what happens next.

well, it sounds cool so far. nothing\'s really sappy, like hermione comes back to hogwarts all beautiful and everyone\'s drooling over her, and you haven\'t ruined draco\'s personality. some turds on this site just have him meet hermione and out of the blue he just says \"i have feelings for you.\" HOW LAME IS THAT??!!! ultra-lame!! so i would keep up the angst and the fighting, but subtly having each character growing more attracted to the other and trying to deny it.
but one more thing--lay off on the f-word. i don\'t curse, and while it\'s your story, if you\'re going to use it, save it only for when the characters are really mad. because it keeps it bad. if you use it too much it\'s just another word. see what i mean? keep writing!!

I like angry Draco i hope you continue cause i\'ve never really seen Draco lose it like that and find it kind......refreshing! Go Draco!

Well that was interesting. Can\'t wait to see what happens. So much anger, and I can sooo relate!!

that was quite a first chapter! I really enjoyed it thouroghly! I like the way he gets so angry, and yet the thought of her soft skin against his is looming in the back of his mind. Keep up the fantastic job!

~AR