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Hehehe... Malfoy is going to have probably the sorest cheek ever if he keeps on going. LoL

Great chapter. Please update soon.

Bek

haha, lol, i know what you mean, great chapter!

This was the first Harry Potter fic that I have ever read. And a darn good one. The interaction between the characters is good and natural. I really like the pairing too. The pace is just right, even though I\'m still waiting for the Lemon. Please update soon, I can\'t wait to see how everything will turn out.

Great job please keep up the wonderful work!

okay, okay, i\'ll review! :D jk, i was going to anyway. you could go far with this. i like how it\'s turning out so far, with just a hint of sexual tension. the only recommendation i would have is to watch the dramatic \"movie moments.\" like them making eye contact a lot. it comes out good on the silver screen, but when being read it can sound cheesy. don\'t take this the wrong way. if you\'re going to have them make eye contact, do it for a reason. like, \"hermione stared into his eyes as if trying to make out what was hidden in their silvery depths.\" something like that. i just made that up. but i like everything else!! please keep updating!!!

wonderful, i cant wait to see where this story is going to go and yes draco is my sex god as well. and its madame pomfrey, shes the nurse, poppy is the herb teacher

hey love the story keep it goin

Death to Lucius...

This is really shaping up to be an awesome story. I can\'t wait to read more. Please update soon.

Bek

I loved that chapter! Wow, is Draco actually feeling jealous?....

a good beginning to a fic! i am intrigued... please update soon so i can continue to enjoy your work!