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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
'lo there
I love this story, hope you update soon.
I love this story, hope you update soon.
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I hope that you''ll continue this fic. I can't wait to see where this goes!
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked the particular way Luna had to address sex. Very Luna-like.
The multicolored wolf cubs was a very sweet idea.
And I liked the mystery at the end.
The multicolored wolf cubs was a very sweet idea.
And I liked the mystery at the end.
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To quote MacDonalds, \'I\'m loving it\'.
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good story. Fluffier than my usual tastes, but very well written.
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi there. Me again. I\'m sorry if that whole Maya thing sounded harsh... It\'s just that I\'m a total history freak and I\'m kinda nit-picky about history things like that. I hope you do understand? Anywho, your story just keeps getting better. Good work and I liked this chapter. One more thing you might wanna check out: you seem to be having a hard time knowing when to use their and there. Their is for people, but you keep using it for places. Well, have a nice nite and I await the next chapter excitedly!!
Emmaline
Emmaline
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s turning a bit too pink, with Severus, and Narcissa, and Draco not being evil but only victims of the circumstances. But since you\'ve taken this path, I vote that you bring back Sirius.
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi there! I do like your story. Very cool, and I like the whole Snape/Cissy thing. Nice. How ever, the Mayans didn\'t live in the Amazon rain forest. They lived on the Yucatan Peninsula of, and the Amazon rain forest is in South America. But that\'s ok. Also, it\'s a good story, but make sure that you edit and proofread if you have time. Betas are a great help, or just do it yourself. I look forward to reading more of your story!!
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAT THE FUCK SNAPE ARE YOU OUT OF YOUR MIND!!! okay apart from that that is a very good story even without the sex
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was GREAT!! Sweet, but not overly so. And very well written.