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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Do you read the text out loud before you post it? One thing that can help with punctuation and phrasing for each character. And, grammar and punctuation are legitimate things to put up if they come between the reader and the story. Don\'t you want to put up your best work? Hold yourself to higher standard?
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh im luving this!! more soon cya xx
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dun dun duuuun! Hmmmm now why would Draco be so interested in coming with? Great chapter. Can\'t wait til you have the next up. Keep the good work up!
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter. it just surprised me when ron agreed with malfoy. usually it\'s hermonie that is the leveled headed one. i nice twist.
i can\'t wait for the next chapter.
Thanks for letting me know that you updated.
luvs ya
i can\'t wait for the next chapter.
Thanks for letting me know that you updated.
luvs ya
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If you still need a beta. I would be interested in helping. email me and let me know. i have a lot of spare time after 8pm to help out.
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE A S P
THANKS!!!!!!!!
THANKS!!!!!!!!
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey there. Just wanted to let you know that i think this is an extremly good start, to what could very well develp into one of my fav stories. I\'m thinking (which i try to do very little of) that the dragon is one draco malfoy. of course that could very well be because of his name. and therefore not very much of a stretch. I can\'t wait for a new chapter.
luvs ya.
luvs ya.
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh-ooh! update! I SOooo wanna see more!
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! i\'m really curious as to what is going to happen next. Hope you update soon!