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So sorry it took me so long to review but my real life is kicking my arse right now. I love where the story is going and I am hoping that she will not die in childbirth. I also hope that Severus can get away from Albus. *prays he will be ok*


Sorry again please forgive me?

Your sister

wow ... im glad remus is going to help them but when will she go away and will albus find out about her ... please more ...keep up the awesome work and please update soon ... later for now

angel

First of all, I would like to say great start to what promises to be another one of your kick ass stories!! However, to beeky63, I would like to say, get a grip!! Before you left your review you should have looked back over the story to make sure that she had put up something about her reference to Star Wars. The excuse that you never read the disclaimers is a load of crap!! How else is an author supposed to be able to convey to her or his readers the information about where they got an idea from? And do not say A/N because she had to put it in the disclaimer to say that she did not own those characters, plots, so on and so forth from Star Wars, that good old George Lucas did!! There is no excuse for bitching somebody out when you know that you haven\'t even read everything that she had on that chapter!! If you are going to have the nerve to leave a review like that, you should make sure that you know what the hell you are talking about first!! Next time get the facts straight before you start to type anything up about another author!!

Don\'t let stupid reviews like that get you down, Tiff, your story looks very good and I am now running off at the speed of dial up internet to read the next chapter. Sorry it took me so long to get here, but you know how it goes! Keep up the good work and just keep doing what you\'re doing!

Alauralen

To Alauralen, I did leave a second review with my apologies, or maybe you didn\'t read everything before you went into your little rant.
To Slytherinegriffendor21, your next two chapters were good. Could you please elaborate on Severus\' abilities? What are they and how does he come to have them? If you plan to introduce more details at a pivotal point in the story, maybe you could leave a little author\'s note. Thanks.

BTW You have a wip called A Cosmic Journey. Are you going to be continuing on with that?

Toodles.

good chapters tiffany

man .. please let them have a happily ever after ... with there baby.... and will albus find out about mione ..please update soon... keep up the awesome work and later for now ...

angel

In the words of the great Dorothy Parker:

This is not a story to be set aside lightly. Rather, it should be hurled against a wall, with great force!!!!

wow this is great i love it ... and what are severus\' abilities and why is dumbledore scared of them being together ... i hope severus can stop his premonition ... ...please more i love it .. keep up the awesome work and later for now

angel

Um...my previous review was not meant to be positive or encouraging. Apologies all around for any meanings misrendered. Please substitute Ms. Parker\'s original word, \"booki,\" for \"story,\" and you might catch my meaning.

My motto in life is to never critize unless you can do better, but I have to say that this chapter is a direct rip off from Star Wars Revenge of the Sith and that is called plagiarism.