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by slygriff21

person angel
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah the dark lord it dead and so is lucius....and i like how he killed him ..... i how mione just had a nightmare ....and it is not true... because severus need to see and hold his son and daughter.... please please update soon ... keep up the awesome work and later for now ...

angel
person Barbara
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This can not end with Severus being killed. I hope that Hermione will be there to stop it.
person Barbara
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, he lived now he can enjoy his family.
person angel
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YEAAAA albus id dead and now severus .hermione and the twins can live in peace now ... please i would like to now that will happen now .. and what will happen to severus for kill albus ... please update soon and keep up the awesome awesome work and later for now ..

angel
person snapeslave
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG...OMG...OMG....what was that...ewwwwwww...evil cliffie...please he can\'t be dead..omg...omg omg...please oh please...i love this story...hurry with next update...keep up the great work...damn that dumbledore...can\'t you aleast make him trip on his beard and do himself in on his way to snapes room...
person angel
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
~sniff sniff~ wow that was great .. and they had twins.... wow ... severus will be shock when and if he finds out ... i know minerva will i hope albus does not kill severus .. please update soon i would love to find out .. keep up the awesome awesome work and later for now

angel
person angel
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
~sniff sniff~ that is soo sad ....im soo hating albus .... he better have a good reason why they can\'t but together .. keep up the awesome work and please update soon ..later fro now..

angel
person angel
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh the baby is coming ..... what will it be .... im glad Minerva is helping them to ....please more ..please update soon ...keep up the awesome work..and later for now

angel
person Barbara
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Severus has to live to be with his wife and child. HINT HINT
person angel
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow .... that is a lot of to take in ... i hope she and the baby will be ok and i hope severus is ok too ... please update soon ..keep up the awesome awesome work and later for now :)

angel