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more soon please

I just HAD to say something after the 'singing pregnancy test'...no, it's not flames, but damn if that sent pics in my head to send chills down my spine! Then I had to laugh at the genius of it all. ^_^ If such a thing like that were real...that's better than smudgy blue/pink! EM

But...but.. Oh, PLEASE update... PAH-LEESE?!?!?! This is just torture! TORTURE, I TELL YOU!!! Grrr... you suck sooooo much puppy tail...(not my puppies tail, mind you...but you definately suck puppy tail. Anyway...update soon, please, because I'm going through 'Potions Mishaps and Secrets Revealed' withdrawl...

Oh, I have a suggestion. What if... what if Harry was also pregnant? And Draco lost his baby or something? That would be a plot-twist! PAH-WEESE? It would be awesome...And it could totally work. O well, I just REALLY don't like any situation with Sub!Draco...and since Harry did bottom for Draco, he could've gotten pregnant, and then like, Draco could loose his baby because of Voldemort, after they found out that Harry was also pregnant! Wouldn't that be something? Please think about it... it sounds awesome!

Slashy Snitch

P.S. I have an HD story, and if you decide to take up my idea on your story, I'll take up an idea of yours on mine. Deal? Awesome =)

Wow, so early for another review...i guess my begging worked, huh? So...how do you feel about that proposal, hmmm?

Slashy Snitch

P.S. Great chapter...update soon? ::-__-;;::

Can't wait for chapter 11! More please!

^^ I'm so happy for them! Please update soon!

Just here for the past 2 hours (yeah slow reader...lol) and read all 10 chapters. I like what you have written so far, please continue.

Oh and will their friends be involved in the story, so is it just based on the characters you have included so far?

Sweet fic this afr only one flame to comment on THE PARTS ARE TO DANG SHORT!!!!!!! Now that I get to this part its like you totaly let it alone. ..come on chicky write more and in a hurry perferably lond and drawn out.

I am so not talking to you....I can't believe you would be that evil

Having just gotten to the fifth chapter in this story, I found that I just had to give it up. It is written a well as any other , nothing exceptional, but that is okay, they cant all be. That wont stop me from still reading a story though. Your authors notes written at random, has taken any believeablity away. By time we get to the lovemaking scene it no longer is a room with the boys I expect to have you make a personal comment at any given time, so escapeing into the story is impossible. You previews are so extensive, that one could read your whole story from them alone. The extensive response to everyone is distracting at best. These responses sometimes take a half page, that a quick thanks everyone for reviewing would well surfice. At this pace you will be having writers block by allowing yourself to be pulled back from the most important thing, which was to write a good story. The Doctor.