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for Love conquers it all

by ewchy

person thrnbrooke
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was fantastic! I can't wait for chapter 3! What happens next?
person Amessis
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Looks like Harry and Draco will have a fun summer!
person Alison
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An update! I love this story, please update soon! =o)
person Amanda
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. I would say get a beta if you could, though. Although I know good beta's are hard to come by. I finally had to dump mine, she was so slow to respond. I figured, I beta other people's stories, might as well do mine, too. lol.

Ok, pointers for the story. Obviously you know it's a little ooc, so I'm not going to grill you on that. I would say make sure this doesn't become another "predictable" storyline. It's got potential, just make sure and mix it up. You also may want to describe Harry's situation more. How (obviously) the Dursley's are being more lax with him, how he was able to get time to go shopping, stuff like that. Maybe have a chapter on him buying clothes Draco will like? hehe, sorry. I'm sure you don't want story ideas from me.

Anyway, I'm enjoying the story and look forward to an update.
person Nightwing
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmm.... i'm intrigued, i think harry's ideals need to be explained more though...
chow for now!
person myniephoenix
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well.. for not being a one shot this has not been updated very quickly.... i want to know what happens.. :)
person Cara
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
puuuuuuuuuuhlease update!!! =D
person Amessis
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good start to this, hope to see more.
person thrnbrooke
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Continue! Wanna know what happens next!