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i didnt like dat shitt

*staring with eyes wide and mouth hanging* OMIFUCKINGGAH. That was unbelivable! It wasn\'t bad but i have to get use to the idea of Draco getting raped by someone, and especially Harry nonetheless. I got to admit though, you keeping Hermione a secret as Lucius\' mate was genius. I had a feeling at the beginning that she was his mate so i had to leave and come back to make sure this was in the right category. DAMN IT! I still can\'t get over the idea of Draco getting raped, Draco killing his mother, and Hermione fucking Lucius. I\'m not going to leave a bad review, as i said before, because I have to get use to the idea. I also love how you made this story unique. I have never, ever heard of a story where Hermione led Draco to his death. I love Draco too much to let that happen, but since this is the first one i read like this....I LOVE IT!

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MUCH LOVE

Latricia

it was good but i think you put it in the wrong section. but it was really good you should do another one just put it in the HG/LM section! :)

generall when someone speaks you use quotation marks, such as \'hi\' he said.

you really need to get someone to check this over, and then maybe repost it

This is very hard to follow. Qutoes would be good. Also this is posted in the wrong section.

Get this out of the D/Hr section!