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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what is this crap potter not very good at all
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s such a fresh, new plot that I can\'t actually say what I think about it. I definitely liked it, but it was very dark, so mabye it\'s sadistic to say I liked it. ;) Anyway, great piece of work - I\'d love to see a sequel for it!! :)
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is definitely different... but not at all bad.
You should get a beta reader, though.
You should get a beta reader, though.
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November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh gosh....
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November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh gosh....
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty good, except it was kind of confusing at some parts.
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And it was in the wrong section, you should have had a warning too.
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was impossible to follow the apparently non-existant plotline. All I could make out was that it was (I THINK) a HG/LM, slashrape, OOC fic mistakenly placed in the HG/DM section. You would do well to find a beta well-versed in making story ideas comprehensible.
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...hmmm...
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow............... 0.o
1st of all you need to get that out of this catagory, because some of us, don\'t like reading slash
2nd you should have someone beta it
3rd that was very confusing
1st of all you need to get that out of this catagory, because some of us, don\'t like reading slash
2nd you should have someone beta it
3rd that was very confusing