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for Let's have some fun

by namilie

person B
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bitch! Harry is suppose to be with Ginny! I just read the first line and said to fuck with this shit! I'll get you for writing this piece of shit!
person americanwerewolf
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
seriously you need a beta otherwise it is childish and unreadable
person Luke
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's hot, but I think I've never read a story with more grammar-errors.
person anya
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story is so cool!!!! it's so great that everyone can fuck each other just whenever they want to! when i read the story, i was already getting aroused myself(do you have to elaborate the sex sessions so well?) anyway, i really like this story! i dunno if there's another chapter to it, but if there is, pls post it quick! i can't wait to get aroused again(this story makes me more aroused than my soft fuckable boyfriend's hardened member)!!!
person Joe
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That story was really crap and made no sence.
person Lunachild
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful and loverly. Just what Hogwarts needs: lots of shagging!!!!
person ally
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really good. Just one thing, I think you kinda need a beta. Cuogh, cough.

Ally x
person Anon
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the pairing system, but you do need some work with grammar. Still, overall it's good, and has promise to get better.
person Ellesmera
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmmm.... Very interesting!

Elle
person Matt
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter waiting for the next one again.