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by darkelf19

schedule February 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Brilliantly written!! Really enjoyed the imagery and use of underlying emotions
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I believe the word I am groping for is ...gobsmacked
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person SnapesPet30
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Completely Speechless*.......okay so I\'m not lol, this was really good. Hope you plan on updated this, I\'m curious as to what happens next.
person Nyxx
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What does OTP stand for?? And was she the actual potion in the cauldron? Or the cauldron itself? That part confused me a bit... please email me or post a clue in your review section!
person Cawdor
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant--I loved that last line! You\'ve got a typo, though: \"I hate your for that.\" It\'s just a typo, true, but since it\'s in a critical line, it really detracts.