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May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story is there going to be more.
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful fic if I do say so myself. I enjoyed it very much so. That's so BAD ASS that you are into classic rock and you slipping in that awesome song by 38 special made it all the more exciting. I am obsessed with classic rock. Hmmmm...I'm going to have to do a songfic. lol. Rock on dude.
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I do appreciate the feedback! I never have been much of a writer. I was hoping to sharpen up my "skills" writing fiction and getting reviews. So thanks! No offense taken.
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I couldnt really get into it. i dont k now what it was, but the first few paragraphs were... un interesting... i'm sorry. and it did seem to get a bit repetitive, always using their names. over and over in the same paragraph...
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I couldn't finish reading your lemon. The run-ons and the continuous use of 'Harry' or 'Remus' or 'he' to start your sentences lost me completely. Change up your sentance starters and get rid of the Runons, and it would be so much better.
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww poor Harry and his insecurities. i like it! i like the way it ended to!