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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
like the story, update asap
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
0.0 wow.....
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well done! I certainly hope he can find Harry.
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK! I JUST HAVE TO SAY, JUST READ IF YOU WANT. I TOLD YOU I\'M A NEWBIE IN THIS CAMP. I EXPLAINED HOW SOME EXPRESSIONS WOULDN\'T MAKE SENSE. AS I SAID READ IF YOU WANT. BY THE WAY...I READ A LOT.
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice, waiting for more...
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I can\'t wait for chapter 8! Lucius knows that Draco betrayed him! Draco is a Veela? Where did Harry go? Will Draco find him? More!!!!
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November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The only anger I feel is from trying to read your story. Spell Checker? Works WONDERS you know. Either that or get yourself a beta reader.
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m confused...I don\'t know if I\'m the Joey reviewer, i guess I am! but I\'m not sure (I mean, it\'s 2 in the morning here), I remember vaguely writing a review with bag and back.
Won\'t Lucius suspect anything when he realises that \'Pansy\' left?
Update soon!
Won\'t Lucius suspect anything when he realises that \'Pansy\' left?
Update soon!
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh that breaks my heart! Poor Draco! Need chapter 7!
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was sooooooooooo Lovely! I love the new version MJ, I realy do! Though it\'s not very diferent from that one I read in my Philosophy classe... can you imagin me reading THAT and everyone in my classe knowing what it was? You cousin knew too...
Well what I want to say is that in the 5th chapter I read the most beautifull kiss scene ever! You\'ve done it very very well my dear, yes you did! Please upload soon, PLEAAAAAAAASE!
Well what I want to say is that in the 5th chapter I read the most beautifull kiss scene ever! You\'ve done it very very well my dear, yes you did! Please upload soon, PLEAAAAAAAASE!