AFF Fiction Portal
person Rea010
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man, chapter 5 was harsh!!! ^_^ hahaha! i agree though. people don\'t have to leave INSULTING comments. it\'s ok to leave a little constructive criticism, but nobody needs to go full out! i liked the story and i hope there will be more to it ^_^ i\'m wondering how remus and harry are going to work out. how can harry date remus of that time if he has that ring on? wouldn\'t it be a little weird?? i guess the same goes or ron and sirius, but i like harry pairings more......... ^_^ keep up the good work!
person Sandy Jean
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
not everybody hates your story. i like your story & i can\'t wait for the next update. i think its great that you write for yourself. keep it up!
person Aisling
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more soon i really like thias so far! poor Remus lol :)
person Jenny
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. I have read this when it was complete I was wondering if you had it on another site where it was complete there. I went looking for this last night as I wanted to reread it and found much to my horror that your redoing it. why? I loved it like it was. But as it\'s your story you can do what you want with it and I understand if you feel you need to redo it. but please if it is completed else where please e-mail me and either send me the link to it or tell me where it is complteted at. please? I really love this story. PLease e-mail me back. Thank you and update soon.

~Jenny
person NIxie928
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
umm... nice rant?? well i personally like your story and if people dont like it then they shouldn\'t read it. I mean some people should get a life if they are going to put down other people\'s story\'s because they dont like them HONESTLY! ok i done with my rant. well i hope your next chapter is out soon i can\'t wait to read it.
person angel
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow how is Harry going to handle Remus....please update soon i would like to read what will happen next ,,keep up the awesome work and later for now

angel
person me
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is the worst story i\'ve read on this site. the plot is ok but you are a shite writer. stop now b4 u embaress urself
person random person 32
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
someone seems to have forgotten that this is \"fiction\" and that in this \"fiction\" there is \"magic\", allowing many things not normally possible to happen.


so please continue, as it seems this is the same story i read a while ago and i want to read it again.
person Master Of The Poke World
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Err.Didnt you ever pay attention in Biology.Cuz if you didnt you should know that buys cant be pregnant.What do you do cum in the ass and expect a baby??????I just lost my interest in this stupid story
person Master Of The Poke World
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I meant \"boys\" but I swear you pissed me that I couldnt concentrate.Asshole