rate_review Reviews

Just wanted to say that I loved the story. Very well done. Can't wait to red more.

hey i love the story!!! MORE SOON PLEASE!

I'm still reading this (just got to your note on flamers) and I wanted to say: YOUR RIGHT! Other peoples opinions don't matter! Though flames (I've gotten my share, was referd to 'God Awful Fan Fiction where 'authors' ripped my story to shreds) are hurtful, you are right in saying the people who do them are cowards. I hope you continue writing, as your ideas are verey intersting and your story is good. Now to go and finish reading it!

what? it just...ends there? ARE YOU MAD?! WRITE MORE!!!!! I DEMAND IT! *waiting*

Hey... this story has a really good plot. However, it might be a good idea if you got a beta reader, or just anyone you know who's really good with grammar to go back and edit your chapters for you. Also, Lily isn't in the same house as James. She's a Ravenclaw, so for her to be in the Gryffindor common room is a little strange. I'm not typing all of this to insult you. I think that your idea is very unique. This story has great potential. It's just a little hard to read because of the errors. But thanks for writing this!
<3 Raisden

P.S. I'm sorry people have been so mean to you about it. Just keep writing, though. I know you'll get better! :)

J/k about the Lily thing! lol... Yea, she was a Ravenclaw in a really good fanfic I read. Geez, I need to stop mixing up fanfics with the actual book. :P But anyhoo, if you want a beta I'd be more than happy to do it. I really do like the story!!!
<3 Raisden (the spaz)

please please please update. I can't wait to read the rest. so awesome. it rocks.

ok let me start off by saying AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ok im better now. truthfully ive never thought of the Sirius/Ron pairing b4 nd now that i have i don lik it but they way u wrote it......I LIK IT!!!!!!! i just need a little bit more detail lik the finished scenes from the memories. i know why u didnt put them in i mean ewwww! but still im a smut fan! nd i dun no i always felt they would go for the older men call it intuition. but yeh lik i was saying just give me some steamy sex scenes next nd ill b good to go. weirdly enough the murarders(sp? srry im tired) sound lik me nd my friends minus peter. im sirius 100%!!!!!!!!!!!!!! anyway keep writing uve got talent!!!!!

Done with what's there, Please please please please please update. It is a smashing story and it has only just begun. I can't wait to read the rest. Please Please update.

What i've been reading so far is so very very good. If you're not done please finish it. Please Please Please.