rate_review Reviews

I so wanted to like this, it had a lot of great spots and ideas. But damn! The grammar was so bad I struggled through it, very distracting! Tow instead of toe. Save instead of safe and to night instead of tonight. Every single time! This story really needed a proof reader. The last thing that made it impossible for me to get through the story was that it seems to be written by someone who has only ever seen the movies. So many facts were written incorrectly. The Snape's weren't a respectable family. His father was a muggle which meant his mother was disowned by the Prince family. The Lestrange brothers were Rodolphus and Rabastan, not Rupert. Bellatrix and Narcissa Black were not twins. And the Potions Professor during the seventies was Horace Slughorn, who Snape replaced. There were a lot of things like that which someone who only watched the movies might not know, since a lot of it wasn't mentioned in the movies. While this is not really a bad thing it did make it irritating for me to read and I couldn't keep going.

Please update I want to see what happens now that they are back home. This is a really good story.

OH MY GOD, PLEASE POST THE NEXT CHAPTER REALLY SOON!

I have to say that this story is amazing I love the theme and though it is now AU I will continue to follow it if that is you continue it I know I'd really like to see the ending. The return and all that.

I loved this story. Its unfair that I am unable to create such wonderful stories. I'm 20 years old and even I enjoyed your story.

Awww where's the next part

...are these fics just about breeding? It seems like most of whats happening is men and women having kids. Lots of kids. Congrats on keeping all the names straight, man.

this story is a really good one but at the end of chapter 25 you put it down that Nyah and Laney's children would be harry's cousins' when they would actually be his aunts'/uncles' because they are his parents brothers' or sisters'. and in the third chapter you put that professor sibble had a vision when she was only speaking of the prophacy.

WICKED!!!!! I'm sooo happy that you updated! I hope that you finish this story soon. I really did enjoy the tale. You are a great writer, and I'm glad that you've written such a fic.

Cheers!

can't believe it's over. i really liked the story and looking forward to the sequal.
hope you post the sequal soon.