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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is going to be very interesting. I check your story every day, please update! More hot Severus wanking action XD
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I almost did not see you had updatted, I think it was a bit to soon for Dumbedor to show up but you managed it quite nicly. Could you please write more?
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Give it up while you're ahead. You truly need a beta.
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December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. Simply beautiful. The thought of Sirius and Severus together seems so...right. I cannot wait for the next chapter. Lovely writing
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would just like to say that you have a fine story going on here and I do hope your not offended or anything but the story is quite difficult to read and there are a few spelling error
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi!!!
I just read your story and I must say I like it a lot!
Very interesting... So... update? Please?
I just read your story and I must say I like it a lot!
Very interesting... So... update? Please?
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow ! I like this story. How long will they stay that way ? Sirius is not treated that bad, he ?
Chapter 3 ? Please !
Chapter 3 ? Please !
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you asked me to clarify: your story does not have any paragraphs. You should have a line between each paragraph and every time a new person speaks. I am not sure if you can use the html codes on this site but it simply is < p > without the spaces which creates a paragraph. It is very hard to read something without paragraphs because you can easily lose your place and everything seems very unstructured.
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Perhaps, Dumbledore would bleach Sirius's fur then he didn't need to use bleach again. hehe
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting consept and stroy line, would you please continue it? I would very much like to read more.