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by Jigsaw

schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story ! It's an original one ! Hope you will update it soon !!! =^-^=
person Sophia
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really can't wait to see what happens next. I really wonder what'll happen when Snape figures out that it's Sirius and not just a normal dog. Keep up the very good work.
person Newtype
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I did enjoy the small bits you have up, I request notification of further updates of of eth web sight the whol enechalate is posted on please.
person Anon
schedule July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its really bad that I don't think your going to write more chapters. I really liked this story. I don't usuallly like reading the slash stuff but i thought this was such a weird pairing that I had to read it. I liked it a lot and I hope sometime in the near future you might decide to write another chapter to this.

Well Byes for now.
person Shardae
schedule July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dang how does Dumbledore alwayz find things out? Make sure u post a new chapter.
person Silver
schedule June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Really. But...um...update would be even better :-)
person Erika
schedule June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn you need to update.
person ocealot
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I really do like this, pleeeeeaaaaase keep on writing, you just can
person Aeko
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
the story's pretty good, nive capturing Sirus' point of veiw but the thing about te dog, dog fur doesn't grow like humans does. if you dye a humans hair eventually their natural hair color will show at the roots, if you dye an animals fur, dog in this case. well Animals shed and their fur is replaced by new strands, so rather than a few weeks of white, Sirius would have a white coat until the next season, when he starts to shed and his fur would then be flecked black until he was fully black again.
person super marshmellow trooper du duper
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can beta if ya like.

And great job! It's really cute so far.