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for A Forced Marriage

by sharingan154

person RAW19
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is excellent. i do hope your not leaving it here!
person bill
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it and I also think you should expand on the story and at least go over one year and see how it is for the new Mrs. Potter. Especially all the attention she will get for marring THE Harry Potter and also when she is caring his child. It should be interesting.
person Anon
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh GOD! Please put a warning on underage sex... especially EXTREME underage sex... I mean- 12?? and a \"gross sex with McGonegell\" warning wouldn\'t hurt either... well-written tho- just gross.