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for For The First Time

by Sarmoti

person deluded disaster
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I started off so confused and then I realized I was seriously pissed at Sirius. AND IT WAS HER VIRGINITY HE STOLE!!! AAAARG! It made me so angry. And she was so desperate, it was disgusting. But I felt bad for her and I wanted Remus happy so badly and I think you ended it so perfectly! I will be the first man to make love to you, was absolutely beautiful! Brilliant job!

Christmas
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was adorable. I think this is the first fic I've read that made me hate Sirius...how interesting. But Remus made it all better, so yay.
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thats so sweet!!
person Megan Consoe
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Mena
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww! That was so sweet. Now I want a sequel!
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this fic, it works well as a one shot. I have to confess, the ending was a little disappointing, but I really don't see how you could have ended it differently. On the whole a really well written and engaging piece.
person UKK
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWWR! SOOO CUTE! I hope you write a second chpater with a lemon between those two! It is soo sweet!
person lemonade
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Will this continue? I was wondering, I keep checking in hopes. ;D
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I loved this story so much! I liked that it was a one shot, and had a sweet and simple romatic ending, yet at the same time I was wishing for more, and more, and more chapters! Congratulations on a terrific feat of fan fiction!
person Anon
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM