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I love Lucius/Hermione fics. so few compared to the Severus/Hermione fics. Please continue, I would love to read more.

Cool chapter. Now, Lucius needs to get Hermione a huge ring and Hermione needs to stop dipping into the Absinthe.

As I already told you, this is a great chapter. I just love the rants throughout. You are a gifted writer and I am honored to help you through this process. I can\'t wait to look over chapter four!

No smut :( but nice, though. I like how you give us the background later than usual cuz it gets so boring with having that all the time in the first chapter. Besides, it was just great!! :)

i hope lucius ask mione to marry him... i love it please update soon ..keep up the awseome work and later for now

angel

I like this story and cant wait to read more

Interesting chapter - update soon, please!

Amazing! I like it very much!
come on, expecting the next chapter!^-^

thankyoupp

I\'m normally a DM/HG fan but I\'ve been expanding my horizons lately. I really like this fic and think it has a number of possibilities. I can\'t wait to see the direction you take this fic. Please continue.

Lala,
Personally, I didn\'t like it. It was too much smut. A really good story needs build up and time to grow on itself to make it more believeable. You gave some background on how he was alone and all and how he got into the Ministry of Magic, but it was all in one small paragraph. This scene would have made much more sense if you had AT LEAST five chapters in front of it. Try getting something going before jumping right into the sex, otherwise, it\'s tacky. Personally, I think the only time you can go right into a \"sex scene\" is if it is a one shot, and even then, it needs to be a well written, a believeable plotline, not just some jibber-jabber.
I would love to continue reading this if you put a little more into it. Good luck!

Heidi Hoe
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