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for The Perfect Wife

by LinW

person moi
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* that was so good! i loved it! and now i\'m really sad that it\'s over... CAUSE IT WAS DA BOMBBBBBBB *cough* er... yeah... awesome story
-moi
person moi
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
alas, there seems to be a different moi out there. we\'re not the same person... incase you were wondering.
-moi
person loudmeggaphone
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh thank you, thank you, thank you!!! I was just thinking of rereading your story, I first read it many, many months ago, but I couldn\'t find it! This is one of my favorite fanfics, and I am so glad you posted it here. Thank you!!!!!!
person sans
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! I really though that this was goona be a OT. Enjoyed reading this story too.
person Chloe the Grey
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another very nice story.
I hope that Harry/Harriet will have the life he/she has always wanted. And Snape too, he seemed to fit into the role of father quite natually. I was hoping that they would ask the Dursleys if they could take Drusilla with them, but it turned out they didn\'t need to.
I hope you\'ve got more stories up your sleeve. :)
person eternity_101
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a really good ending. At first I had my misgivings but it turned out alright
person Chloe the Grey
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to mention a few things. First, I was wondering how Harry dealt with things like facial hair. He must have it, did he assume that all women shaved their faces on a daily basis like he did? He\'s not a eunuch is he? Which leads me to the second thing I wanted to mention. This story, Harry in particular, reminded me of \"Cry to Heaven\" by Anne Rice. With Harry being so tall and dressed as a woman and everything. Anyway, good job. :)
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, oh my god, OH MY GOD! I could just scream, I\'m in such adoration! This AU period piece was absolutely perfect! There was romance and heartache and only a few predicted twists and turns (mainly that Snape was gonna get all paternal and...yeah...you know). I just...oh my god, I love this story!
person antipyro
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What a great idea to place this in the 1800\'s, no magic except fate and characters roughly in sync with canon, sort of....

Loved the way Harriet was brought up, not knowing she was a he - (*snickers* - bathes in the dark....)

So glad there wasn\'t a Lucius/Severus thing going on, just sex. Would have been nice to read some of that.....

Figures the Dursley men were useless, can\'t even put on a decent funeral, no less take care of a small child - well written.

Thank you so very much for this fic, great work!
person jacky
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh it was wonderfull!!!! I loved it.

:)