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for The Perfect Wife

by LinW

schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was sweet really enjoyed reading it i'm going to sleep now since i have stayed up reading the story after homework i have to sleep now. enjoyed the story.
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well, that was certainly unusual. very clever though and well-written. brava!
person crissy
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome. i was a bit in suspense. i mean there was the summary and the fact that harry potter is male but you wouldn't be the first crack pot fanfiction writer to conveniently change the sex of a character to better fit their story. but you didn't. that's awesome! very cute a bit simplified but i loved it. very odd with harriet and all. it reminds me of something but i can't remember what. anyway it was a good read and an excellent mix of harry potter characters minus the magic.
person shadow
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Those kind of society totally suck. It's a pretty good story. It's interesting and unique. I don't think I've ever read anything like this before. Anyways, good job. The dulseys is a bunch of @$^#$. At least Aunt Pet is quite nice but what she have done by not telling harry what he is is kind the cruel. But don't three year old know they are male or female? Maybe in the concious level no but subconcious yes. Care too much of what people think will lead to disaster or danger. At least Aunt Mineva didn't go that way and actually try to help Severus and I guess harry to find some kind of happiness.
person x-ta-c
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i LOVE it!!!!!! it's great. i love the angst when "harriet" discovered sev and lucius were "together"...... ugh. but in the end sev and harry were happy and that is all that matters! go harry and sev! YAY ^_^

i hope there are many more stories like this one!
person brickhead8
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think there should be more stories like this one. severus and harry pairings are the best........
person JJ
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That story was incredible!!!!
What a neat idea you had, as well as cudo's for having the background knowledge to pull it off.
Very creative.
I look forward to whatever else you write.
Thanks.
person Ramos
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was an interesting tale, and well written. One question, however... Does Harriet need to pluck her chin and upper lip constantly? Surely, there would be some hair growth if he's fully functional. Just a thought.
person Sahira
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww so cute:)
person Natalie
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was brilliant! Amazing plot line!